Hi guys,
As you can see my Anzac writing is not here. All you need to do is press My Anzac day up in purple and the link will take you to my work. If you have anything to say please comment and give me feedback.
Doing this Anzac writing was great even though I didn't do much Anzac related things it was still fun being with my family. It was nice hearing my little sister laugh because of her being at the beach for the first time and that was amazing. Thanks Blog u later.
It was such a beautiful sunny day this year that going to the beach with family was an awesome thing to do. The soldiers that went to war missed their families more than anything else, so spending time with, and appreciating, our families is an important part of Anzac Day I think. It was lovely to read about your little sister. The 'D' on Anzac Day is a capital as it names that day. Choose your edit button and correct it.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Amie and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you added the picture so this blog post makes it appealing to look at! It made me think of when our school had a Anzac assembly. Have you thought about changing the link about your story so that everyone has permission to read it? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsamiem.blogspot.co.nz/. Nice work!
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Kia Ora Caitlin my name is Sheeandra I go to Tautoro School and I am a year 6. I really like how you added this picture so this blog looked interesting to look at. The one thing I wanted to say was that your link to your work is not working so you need to put another link in so that we can look at your Georges work. Blog you later.
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